All Comments on 'Workplace Interruption'

by typical_ingenue

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Why did you change POV in the last paragraph. As it was this was more an outline for a story. Keep trying.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Amazingly hot for me cuz i can relate to this so much its like deja vu

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