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by LadyFoxe

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Please do more :) :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Just don't get how gagging and retching are erotic.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Amazing job! I loved how you used the pronoun "his" instead of "hers". It made the story so much more amazing.

visioneervisioneeralmost 9 years ago

Again LadyFoxe (I read 'Worship' after 'She Takes a Risk'), you do a great job getting into the submissive's head space and her desire to surrender control. What would have made this story better is more dialogue. While it is clear she knows her Master intimately, to readers he feels distant and wooden without hearing him speak.

I hope you continue writing and have more stories to share.

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A wealth of life experience to draw on and the powerful ability to empathise with others. A heart full of love to offer and passion enough to tap into needs and cravings. Tender, caring, passionate and loving That's me............