Wrapped Up with a Bow

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"Hey, it's okay," Lynn said, "we don't have to-"

"No, listen, that came out wrong," Jet interrupted. "What I'm trying to say is.. I think.. I feel like it already is more than that, and I just didn't see it 'til today. Does that make sense? Like, we're so close, I guess I couldn't see the forest for the trees."

Lynn's train of thought was completely derailed. Had she heard that correctly? She found herself momentarily dumbstruck, but filled with a rush of hope.

Jet continued, "Shit, I'm sorry, I'm making it weird-"

"No!" Lynn managed, "I feel that way too."

Another long silence, but this time tension seemed to be rapidly fading from the air.

"You.. you feel that way too?" Jet asked.

"Yeah."

A smile crept across Jet's face, and tears welled up in her eyes. Lynn smiled back and pulled her in close again. Their lips came together in a gentle, passionate joining, fueled by a sense of mutual relief and excitement for what the future would hold. Old friends reinvented as new lovers. There were a lot of unknowns, but for now they both knew one thing: it felt right.

Finally, Jet asked, "so, does this mean we're a thing now? You and me?"

Lynn laughed. "I think it does. I mean.. I hope so."

Laying her head on Lynn's shoulder, Jet responded softly, "Sounds good to me."

Minutes passed in comfortable silence, and then a thought occurred to Jet, "Well, I did end up getting out of those clothes, but I don't have anything else with me to go home in."

"I'm sure I have something you can wear," Lynn said. She kissed Jet on her head and then untangled herself from their embrace. She got up to go look for clothes, but took a moment to peek outside through the blinds. "Though I don't know that you'll be going home just yet."

Jet got up and peeked out the window too. The snow had seriously accumulated since her arrival - at least two inches on the ground already and it wasn't letting up.

"Oh yeah, I'm not driving in that," Jet said. "Well then. We're snowed in, what're we gonna do?"

Lynn blushed and flashed a knowing smile at Jet, "I can, uh, think of a couple things.."

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Only_connectOnly_connectover 2 years ago

Fabulous! Very strong writing style, and such detail, it makes the whole scene come alive!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Very well done.

Everyone else has pretty much said what I feel already so don't want to sound like a parrot. Will say I sincerely look forward to reading more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
AWESOME!

So realistic I felt like I was in the room reveling in and sharing their experience.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
lovely

two friends climbing into each other's souls through lesbian breast touching and groin grinding, whilst they tell each other of their mutual yearnings. Very erotic, very sensual, very sweet.

JacquelynHeatJacquelynHeatover 6 years agoAuthor
Thank you so much!

Thank you for the kind comments! It really means a lot! I do plan on writing more (and longer) stories, especially since this one has been so well-received. I've got a couple of story outlines in mind, and an ever-growing cast of Crosscannon characters to explore. Lynn and Jet will definitely be reappearing, most likely as supporting characters while I put some of their teammates center stage for the next few stories. I'm really excited to introduce more of this world :)

MaonaighMaonaighover 6 years ago
Don't worry

In your preamble you said that you supposed your readers would have a familiarity with roller derby. Don't worry about that, Jacquelyn. There are stories on this site with backgrounds in American football, soccer, cricket, baseball, softball, rugby, swimming, wrestling--you name it, it's there and probably a (fairly high) proportion of readers will neither know nor care about the sport itself. What does matter is the story itself, the plot and the quality of the writing. Well, there wasn't too much plot in this one but the standard of writing was good. So keep at it, it will be interesting to see how the series develops.

Crystallised_TearsCrystallised_Tearsover 6 years ago
Wow!!

I am so annoyed!! This is your only story?? I really really hope you’ll be publishing more, this story is just...wow!! It’s just so beautifully written, excellent details, perfect character development... I was hooked right from the get go. Even with knowing what would happen from the summer, I still got chills when they fist kissed. Just, wow!! I NEED to read more of your work!!

Thanks!

Smily07Smily07over 6 years ago
Love this !

I loved this story. The character development and plot was well done. The slow but arousing build up of attraction and sensuality between the two was fabulous. It was enjoyable and yes arousing ! Can't wait to read more !

gjames17gjames17over 6 years ago
Sweet, Beautiful, and Hot!

Very well done! For a first submission, this was really excellent. You are a talented writer and I would love to read some more of your work, especially if you’d like to further explore the relationship between these two roller derby queens. I also love the setting as childhood memories came flooding back...memories of the San Francisco Bay Area Bombers, New York Chiefs, Charlie O’Connell, Mike Gammon, and Judy McGuire. Thank you so much for sharing this and I look forward to any other stories you wish to share.

lesbirenalesbirenaover 6 years ago

Very beautifully worded and excellent narration. Love to read more like this.

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