All Comments on 'WVC Ch. 17: Training 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Yup, still Hotttt!

Another 5* from me!! They just keep getting better. It would be awesome to see them include some chastity device between sessions. I absolutely love your writing. Thanks for another great read!

j

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
too bad

As is so often the case with multiple chapter stories, Bill has passed the concept point of the story and has petered out, no pun intended. The obvious question, which is not addressed by the author, is, 'how did the all female club have training procedures for males if Bill was the first male inductee'? Everything through chapter 16 could have been adapted from female initiations but chapter 17 is not believable. Too bad. Bye WVC

gupiaogupiaoover 9 years agoAuthor
Good Point ---

See the opening scene of Ch.19, 'The Pool Party', for an explanation as to "'how did the all female club have training procedures for males if Bill was the first male inductee'?

ArtswitchArtswitchover 1 year ago

Remembering the good days when I was in my 20s and could have an erection that crept over the waistbsnd of my briefs, and could discuss with my girlfriend (later my wife) if we should have another round of sex before falling into sticky sleep in each others arms. Decades later only goes to 5 inches unless with help of those blue pills

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