All Comments on 'WVC Ch. 25: The Ladies Brunch'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
at last

if he didn't start cumming, he would be having three wet dreams a night. If he wasn't already!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

Looking forward to see their two butts punished by the WVC :)

mrwidehorizonsmrwidehorizonsalmost 9 years ago
Best yet!

I hope rather than being kicked out, we get to see them punished!! Chastity belts for both!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Observations after 25 chapters

First off, don't stop writing these. Even if I don't love them I've read all 25 thus far and just came here looking for #26.

* Bill seems to be the only male in the series, certainly in the school. Throw in a token guy or two for verisimilitude.

* No one has ever heard of PIV sex in this universe. Not realistic at all and hugely disappointing.

* The initiation ceremony was a little rapey. The little lesbian girl was kind of forced into blowing him.

* Honestly, by now he should be completely over his body modesty. Everyone in the whole damn college, plus most of the alumni and their daughters, has seen his cock. Not one of them doesn't think it's beautiful. Fucking get over it, Bill!

* So. Many. Handjobs.

* Bill is such a sucker for the WVC. He could just about pick a girl in the college at random and she'd give him everything he wanted, including his precious handjobs and his daily three-finger butt-fucks. Those frigid hoes at the WVC are just stringing him along.

* As other commenters have pointed out, he'd be having six wet dreams a night by now.

* Bill has literally never met a woman who didn't want to jerk him off. Even the one who was forced to blow him loves to stroke his cock.

* I don't think 'stalk' is a very sexy synonym for penis.

* All those herbal supplements are going to give him kidney failure.

Keep up the good work. And let the poor sap get some pussy. Hasn't he been through enough?

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

I can't wait to see what punishment they will get! Chastity belts would be a cool idea.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Love this story

After 26 chapters, Bill has only just now felt some titties. He gets handjobs and

blowjobs but hasnt even thought to get his dick in some pussy. Kim would have been

stunned into silence if he would have fucked her.

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