All Comments on 'WVC Ch. 26: Training 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
So get a great editor

Cut this mess down to about 4 or 5 chapters and maybe, just maybe, you'd have something worth reading.

RaivinRaivinover 8 years ago
Yay!!

Now That's what I like to see... punishment that actually Hurts! Excellent job and I look forward to further chapters. Oh, and anonymous can go stick their head in a filled ice bucket. Though exhibitionism isn't one of my kinks, it's a great story line. And I'd like to point out to an, of course, anonymous (translation: chicken-shit) poster from the previous chapter, the author stated quite clearly in the beginning that there was only one male on campus. That's one of the things about being the author, you get to create your own world.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Men on campus ....

Chapter 01 in the first paragraph mentions 20 men ?

HeadofglenmoreHeadofglenmoreover 8 years ago
Great story

Enjoyed the complete series. Can't wait for additional chapters.

AustinMAustinMover 8 years ago

I agree with raivin,This is an excellent story,I'm looking forward to chapter 27. I hope this next chapter comes really soon.

Vulcan_in_OhioVulcan_in_Ohioover 1 year ago

Should have included pegging to reinforce Bill’s subservience.

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