All Comments on 'X-Mas Addiction Cure'

by True_Motherfucker

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Azrael1801Azrael1801about 6 years ago
Next chapter

Before i got to page 5 i was thinking garys a shit that needs to be dommed into humiliation and you beat me to it on page 6. Albeit you havent got to that point the seeds are there. So looking forward to the next chapter.

ManoBlueManoBlueabout 6 years ago
This guy is a wimp

All drug users are losers.

SiodisSiodisabout 6 years ago
Can't het enough.

This story is pretty good so far.

Cannot wait to see more.

mentalmanmentalmanabout 6 years ago
Still hot....

...... in spite of the grammatical or spelling errors. Might be a good idea to get an editor for those things? But in spite of that, I still gave it 5 stars, just because of the heat 😀

homerjayhomerjayabout 6 years ago
excellent

looking forward to see what happens next. thanks.

saji91saji91about 6 years ago
What will be next?

Looking for next. Please make it fast .. :D

wifeslaveslutwifeslaveslutalmost 6 years ago
More!!

As a former addict, I like how you addressed the issues and insecurities that sobriety brings. And I love how you are weaving the family together. I cannot wait to watch Gary go down. I HATE people like him.

tmark0099tmark0099over 5 years ago
More

There is much storylines yet to be explored. Don't keep us waiting.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

Wow, that was insanely hot! I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter!

WretchedMonkeyWretchedMonkeyover 5 years ago
You really have to continue this.

It's such an engaging story with intriguing characters and dynamics. I would urge you to get someone to check your work before publishing though as there are quite a few places where small words are missed, in the wrong order or you've used the wrong word. My internal editor was having to make little adjustments on the fly as I read through each chapter. The story was so good though, I'll be looking forward to the next instalment.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago

This story just needs easter addiction cure to finish up the last part of the story & I hope you will write it soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
more

yes I agree need more

get rid of gary they catch him having an affair and drugs

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Great job

I loved all the stories in this set and agree , we need to find out how it ends.

wrmhrtddaddy2wrmhrtddaddy2about 4 years ago
Waiting for more!

I enjoy stories that keep both my "heads" engaged.

Looking forward to seeing where you take this saga. Very engaging in all levels, please cumtinue.

Cutty4637Cutty4637about 4 years ago

I sure hope there is going to be more to this story. Don't leave us hanging, literally.

Mojo648Mojo648almost 4 years ago
Review.

What happened next?

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Great arc

I started the series not really liking Max but the story arc for him and everyone has been great. I know it has been a couple years but I would love to see more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Continue!

I got more hooked in this series than I planned... keep it going!!

englishnospeakenglishnospeakover 3 years ago

c'mon, its nearing 2021 and no updates?

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Brilliant, need an Easter story.

twistidmonkeytwistidmonkey12 months ago

It really sucks this never got continued

knershknersh10 months ago

This need a final Part

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