by True_Motherfucker
Before i got to page 5 i was thinking garys a shit that needs to be dommed into humiliation and you beat me to it on page 6. Albeit you havent got to that point the seeds are there. So looking forward to the next chapter.
...... in spite of the grammatical or spelling errors. Might be a good idea to get an editor for those things? But in spite of that, I still gave it 5 stars, just because of the heat 😀
As a former addict, I like how you addressed the issues and insecurities that sobriety brings. And I love how you are weaving the family together. I cannot wait to watch Gary go down. I HATE people like him.
Wow, that was insanely hot! I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter!
It's such an engaging story with intriguing characters and dynamics. I would urge you to get someone to check your work before publishing though as there are quite a few places where small words are missed, in the wrong order or you've used the wrong word. My internal editor was having to make little adjustments on the fly as I read through each chapter. The story was so good though, I'll be looking forward to the next instalment.
This story just needs easter addiction cure to finish up the last part of the story & I hope you will write it soon.
yes I agree need more
get rid of gary they catch him having an affair and drugs
I loved all the stories in this set and agree , we need to find out how it ends.
I enjoy stories that keep both my "heads" engaged.
Looking forward to seeing where you take this saga. Very engaging in all levels, please cumtinue.
I sure hope there is going to be more to this story. Don't leave us hanging, literally.
I started the series not really liking Max but the story arc for him and everyone has been great. I know it has been a couple years but I would love to see more.
I got more hooked in this series than I planned... keep it going!!