All Comments on 'Xanadu Cove - All Good Things'

Pretty good story but MANY writing errors need an editor's corrections.

A bit confusing but had some sexy moments.

Great idea, poorly written. There are too many spelling and grammar errors that constantly detract a reader from a fun story. Abbey and Abby are the same person? In the swinger house story you mixed Pete and Derek's names up a few times which cause confusion. But the worst error is that the story is in the wrong order. Parts 2&3 should be switched. 3 stars because of awful editing and inexcusable order errors