All Comments on 'Xavier Smith'

not for me

Pretty good yarn and I love a good yarn. Thanks Nyminus

this story was great.write more and a lot.

Thanks for the entertainment.

....thanks.

Author - you deserve much more than the 100 max. - this was a real story with touchable real characters on elaborate stages.<P>

Very Impressive even in the necessary short story compression. Your next is looked forward to.<P>

With Very High Regard

The sad start had me wondering for a while if the story was going to be just an outline or if it would flesh out. It did and was excellent. When reading the commentaries I was perturbed by finding myself in complete agreement with NYminus, who did not even use the word puta and connect with his mother and his wife.... My fear that someone had slipped a drug in my drink was relieved by finding that Anon in Canada had made yet another baseless evaluation of the story. I am looking forward to more stories from this author.

and the naming of the vessel was a hoot.

Packed a lot in but did so in a readable manner. Nothing wasted. good one.

indulgent for the last page and a half. Enjoyed it though, thanks...Mancelt.

kinda a weird story. a lot of it seemed jumbled and out of place. if it was written better, it might have been more enjoyable.

As i liked some of this authors other stories. The beginning was a bit slow but did introduce the main character's background. A nice change from all these wimpy cuckhold stories popping up lately.

Well done, JB !

LeFrog

I enjoyed the hell out of it! Definitely a Five Star read; thanks for writing such a fine story.

Crisp, to the point with economical freedom to conjure up the scene without having to explain it. Clever, in a Harold Robbins-like way. People who are able to invoke imagery and symbolism in fleshing out a situation like this one, should enjoy this story.

A good old fashioned sit by the fire storytellin' yarn -

Really nicely tied up - you do well with all the loose ends - nice - Thank you -

My 2 cents.

I didn't think I would like it but I did. Sort of rambled some at parts but I enjoyed it.

Thank you. tom anon

***** ***** ***** ***** *****

Now I have to go read a bunch of your other stories...

Very ambitious and sprawling ! It lost me a couple times, what with all the ancillary characters but always came back to the core individuals. This is an author with singular style. Loved the dry, humor. Wish the basic story could get expanded some & turned into film directed by Clint Eastwood.

Interesting story, but a bit meandering and boring at times.

Legendary character and nice flow. The ending was raw and abrupt, otherwise extremely enjoyable.

A little meandering in spots but all in all a good read.

Love it! So I gave it a five !

Only a truly talented author can weave an epic in so few words, yet still manage to leave the reader feeling satisfied.

unhappy people living miserable lives. it wasn't till the end that anyone actually liked the person they were with.

So, 1* !!

What kind of life experiences have you had?

Encore! Encore! LOL

My favorite part was when she died.

... why other commentators/authors never mention your name when they talk about "The Loving Wives Greats of Literotica". I love the tongue-in-cheek humour that you incorporate so effortlessly in your writing.

Takes me a while to get comfortable with your style but really got interested.

I liked the twists in the storyline and characters. Well written couldn't ask for more if I was paying for it!

Please keep writing for your pleasure and I will keep reading your work for my entertainment. A sincere thank you for your efforts!

The typos and other errors are sometimes jarring and sometimes confuse, but the story and its various excursions and surprises were wonderful.

3rd time & I enjoy it.

One of the better tales I have read on here. Very nicely done.

JimBob44 out did himself this time. Good story. Good ending.

jealousy.

go enjoy your retirement, TK U MLJ LV NV

Xavier sets up Nakita with the FBI. When Nakita's son tries to kill Max the FBI prevents it. But Max was never even threatened. however Bucky, Xavier's wife, was clearly threatened and the threat was recorded and known to the FBI.

BUT THEY ALLOW NAKITA TO KILL XAVIER'S WFE AND LOVER?????????

Makes absolutely no sense.

Good writer's can't compensate for a flawed plot.

The usual JB44 story. Interesting locales and fascinating characters populate this story. Xavier was a good man abandoned by his whore mother and betrayed by the cheating whore wife Bucky. He wins his last fight, takes care of the Russian mob and lives happily ever after with the mob boss's daughter. That's a good story.

So they let good ol Bucky and her attorney take the Bullet. Now along with the Confession they had them all Trussed up.

Loved it. Great characters, action-packed, happy ending. It would make a great movie too. Thanks for posting.

A great story, great characters, and an ending few other authors here would dare. From my comments, its probably obvious by now that I'm working my way through your catalog - your writing continues to amaze, amuse and intrigue me. This is one of your best.

Thank you for sharing your talents with us.

Great story start to finish. Thanks for the 5* ride!

Masterful. This story has everything: great characters, quirky settings, interesting story, surprises and feeling. Very well done, once again, JimBob44.

It was well worth reading twice

Quite a wild ride for a story, nicely done

How the hell you managed to connect these random rants and create this great story, is beyond me. 5*.

great symmetry. Love the story.

i mulled over the FBI not stopping Bucky"s murder. Seemed that X just forgot to tell them about that part?

Wow, all over the place but I couldn't stop reading. Good story!

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Mucho Gusto!

11/10!!!!!

Survivors. Have nots at the end of painful and humiliating gauntlet. The failure rate was as high as one egg being fertilized by millions of spermazoa.

4/5

Nice story. Far too long introduction