All Comments on 'XXX of Love, Episode 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
More

This storyz hot! More plz!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
I think I just lost 20 IQ points...

This story was awful. Please turn off the VH1/MTV and go read a book or something...or better yet go read a real literotica story.

Calit69Calit69about 15 years ago
Confused -Who's who

Pretty harsh comment for first attempt. At least you had nuts to try. You could only improve as first story very confusing. Reality concept could work with fewer characters who are developed to greater extent and action more graphic. Good luck

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

I want more!!! I love this story!!!!

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