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Pretty harsh comment for first attempt. At least you had nuts to try. You could only improve as first story very confusing. Reality concept could work with fewer characters who are developed to greater extent and action more graphic. Good luck
This story was awful. Please turn off the VH1/MTV and go read a book or something...or better yet go read a real literotica story.