All Comments on 'Yearning Hearts Ch. 05'

This was amazing, real good. Will there be more?

One last chapter to go

I didn't want it to end......thank you......pls dnt keep me waiting for long....

Wow, love the chapter, hot! So glad they're back together, Thank you for sharing your amazing talent with us! Trying to patiently wait ch.6!

Great story and fantastic chapter

The only thing is there were a number of spelling and grammatical errors that slightly detracted from the story

Impatiently waiting for more!!!

Who would forgive someone being the father of their child? His best friend?? Damn, I guess it's my fault reading love stories with men as a woman! It's bizarre and insane. Completely unrealistic but you're a good story teller with talent. I just need 2 find that gay love story that doesn't have an unrealistic soppy ending or have someone forgive an asshole for something unforgivable! Oh well, my bad!

So, I was just randomly going through some of the comments and I gotta say, thank God I don't have low self esteem and can laugh some of these hateful comments off. I know that you guys know absolutely nothing about me and quite frankly you aren't supposed to because the internet is such a mean place sometimes, but for those who are getting a little too caught up in the fictionalization of the story and are attacking my writing abilities, you should know that I'm not a certified writer, lol as you may have already figured out. Sometimes I come up with these crazy ideas and I just want to write about them and share them with you guys. I'm sorry if it seems like I'm giving a sermon here, but I just wanna say to those who really take the time to conceive these negative thoughts and actually post them; whoever you are please get a punching bag or have some really awesome sex like a real human being to release all those stress and anger that you have pent up. Stop trolling and find another story to read. There are ton of stories on Literotica for you to pick choose and refuse; there's absolutely no need to be mean and nasty. And please don't get me wrong guys, I love love love reading comments where you all are really into the characters and I wholeheartedly welcome your constructive criticism and opinions as it pertains to my writing, please keep em coming. :-D <3<3<3

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