Yo-Yo Chronicles Ch. 01 Ending

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It was six years before she got married again. I made sure to pull her fiancé aside and tell him what an incredible woman she was. I never said anything about why we broke up, and don't know what she told him. Will and I became good friends. We even watched football together, and caught a beer now and then.

Jory put on a good face, but I knew. I knew she didn't love him like she had loved me. She didn't touch him like she used to touch me, didn't dote on him. I heard them argue, and knew they didn't have the same thoughts, the same dreams, the same loves and desires that Jory and I had shared.

I saw the occasional look, when I'd hold my kids in my lap, or when I'd kiss my wife. When we'd laugh, and talk about our adventures. The way Bonnie couldn't help but reach out and touch me when she was in reach, how I'd run my hand across her rear, give her a squeeze in passing. Little kisses for no reason, that would make me smile. Whispers of what I could expect later that night, leaving me hard and on display.

Once in a while I'd see that hint of sadness in Jory's eyes, the stray tear, and know that the memories of what she'd lost were still there, still burning. Reminders of how much I'd loved her, and how she'd thrown it away.

And I would smile, knowing my revenge was still paying dividends.

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mourambamouramba27 days ago

Ken's definitely an asshole.. Still thinking of revenge feels like an insult to Bonnie. Like he just married her to spite Jory. Also, with what he's doing with the sister and cheating on her husband.. and saying he's teaching her so she can blow her husband. he's just as bad.. fucking lunatic

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TrainerOfBimbosTrainerOfBimbosabout 1 month ago

Honestly, the slutty sister-in-law thing grossed me out so much I skimmed the rest of the story. Like, even if she was a slut and offering to blow him or fuck him or whatever for her sisters sake, their carrying on after that was disgusting.

RanDog025RanDog0253 months ago

Damn, I gave it 5 BIG ASS STARS but that was cruel. Why couldn't he just let it go and not give her that last night. He talked to Her as he wanted her to know that it was her added punishment before he finally abandoned Jory for the last time and your last words, "And I would smile, knowing my revenge was still paying dividends." I couldn't help feeling so sad for her. Fuck you are good at this writing shit, lol. Thank you! Excellent story.

shadrachtshadrachtabout 1 year ago

Not sure if I commented on this before, but this is such a great ending, such a true ending to such a horrible, disturbing setup. Not that the setup was badly written, but it was disturbing. It bothered me for a long time, until I found this ending. This is at least my second time of reading this, and it's just as good as it was the first time around.

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