All Comments on 'Yoga Monster'

I think you have a solid story here and would suggest you continue it. I'd also suggest you run it through an editor first as there are some mistakes that can be fixed.

Stopped reading at "over a foot"

That bardic gnome, Grobnar, is right.

Good story, but on top of the grammatical issues, I'd also suggest illustrating bodily reactions more and the excessive and somewhat hysterical dirty talk less.

Good story even though a little exaggerated on the length of his cock. But certainly believable for sure. If a woman is a size queen,yoga is the venue to find and satisfy their craving. My mature wife (53) instructs hot yoga at her in-home studio. Here she finds her exceptionally hung yoga studs via their skin tight yoga shorts. And those whom are that endowed typically enjoy to show it off to gratefull women such as my wife. She offers them nude one on one classes whereby I watch her thru a two way mirror go down on her young very hung student in various poses to completion. Often coaxing two or three cumloads via her expert and enthusiastic oral passion.