All Comments on 'You Are What You Are Ch. 06'

I like the story line along with the sex which makes it interesting. Great character development. I can't wait for the next Chapter.

Which is what good writing should do

Want Jason back!! Love the story , hopefully you can get them back together some how. Thanks for taking the time to write.

I am liking the twist with Molly being a con, though it does get in the way of my required HEA. I am pro-Jason as much of a dick as he was. At least he loves her. Can't wait for my HEA!

The writing was very good. I'd like to know where the story will go with Derrick. This interracial twist, and the conflicts it generated with molly's southern background, was a superb turn.. Please continue.

Don't really get this story. Was fine up until the con thing. Now she's been used by a madam? I think this storyline went astray.

Well, this story just went ALL the way ugly.

Like anonymous, I was confused by the sudden change in characterisation from Molly being an innocent housewife to being a con artist and the brother of another con man. What happened to Jason? What happened to Frankie? This series started to be really interesting showing the degradation of a naive young woman and could have been developed in a very intriguing way in about four chapters. Sorry, but I’ve read better.

I have read all of these stories and I liked them. I hope there is more very soon.