by Hooked1957
Come on Hooked, you're much better than this trash. I know it's a common plot device in LW to have a husband love his wife unconditionally and another is allowing himself to be bought off ( not brought off!) with freely given sex but this is so far over the top it's no longer even in Earth's atmosphere. One star for the most repulsive piece of garbage you've ever written, and that's really saying something as I'm normally one of your biggest fans.
So he wakes up with a cock in his mouth, now I admit my anatomy might be a little rusty but I’m pretty sure the mouth contains gums and protruding from said gums are things called, oh what were they called now my memory does this sometimes, ah yeah they’re called teeth and teeth in combination with the fulcrum provided by the jaw hinge would I think make short work of slicing through an appendage that contained only blood and cartilage.
Author should think these things through before writing nonsense.
Repugnante relato!!!! Que tristeza leer tanta basura!!!. El autor piensa antes de volcar en el papel tanta porqueria???
What a fucking MORON! Someone sticks their cock in my mouth and I bite it the fuck off!
Worst story on Literotica.
He should have been charging, that'd be a nice earner. Of course today they have websites for women that crave attention maybe that would have surficed and going from the oft quoted earning figures she could have been somewhere up to 500k better off a year. Really though the idea that at 50 a woman just magically not only turns into a slut but ceases to give a shit about their husband while still professing to live them is absurd.
Bite and fight. If everyone has choices and can decide what they can do with their own Bodies, then self defense is permitted when being forced into unwanted sex.
Traci, Jack, Nick, and Tony would all have an unfortunate “accident “ when Steve’s house exploded due to a gas leak. Problem solved. Two stars ⭐️ for this one. Maybe Hooked will redeem this story by the end
A total waste of time... poor storyline; disjointed writing; totally unlikeable characters. One star... a gift as even one star is not deserved.
Can’t believe the vitriol! Author wrote the story.
If so bad stop reading and leave a negative comment but no need for the vicious attacks. Good description of the MC’s thoughts. Don’t like his motivation but we’ll written
Sry but there's nothing that a post 50 Yr old has to offer if its not monogamy. Health, looks etc is just all down hill. Gravity is not a friend and the ability to fight off disease diminishes with age.
Tolerating a single lover is one thing but the second it got to multiple it would just be untenable.
I stopped at the second chapter. Nobody loves a woman that much. She is controlling bitch and he is a total fool.
NO. ABSOLUTELY NOT! That was SEXUAL HARRASSMENT OR MORE! Unauthorized sexual penetration. NO! NEVER GONNA SUPPORT THAT!
Hooked1957 you are disappointing me here. WHAT ARE YOU THINKING by posting this crap?
1 star.