by Hooked1957
He went from having a cheating wife to giving blowjobs... Winning the battle? Yep, almost there.
I must have missed some chapters some where along the way 1
me thinks he doth protesteth his gayness too much!
To preserve this marriage, wife needs a major adjustment. Perhaps her fear of hubby getting some on the side will be the remedy.
He was drugged and forced to blow two guys against his will. Once would be enough for any man who isn't gay. Tony would die and Jack would be castrated. The wife would be out on her ass and can explain to the kids why.
Even its your pervert fantasy it have to be believable!! But your crap is only laughable!!!
he had to suck cock so he should give her a cunt to eat after he has shot a load in it and if she won't eat it throw hwer out on her ass and don't take her back
do you let her anywhere near you, let alone in your house and around the family. There is no doubt you are a very sick individual.
What a poor day this is.
There is no loving wife in here, it is just about a woman and her tricks.
Some say Not believable But this guy's wife is apparently a psychotic bitch. This is entertaining At least marginally And I will keep on reading But there better be some bitch burning at the end of the story.
I agree with the comment, that if I found a cock in my mouth it wouldn't be attached any more!
You should never put any body part between even a weak set of molars and incisors if he or she doesn't want it there. The flip side of that gem of common sense is that it's pretty unlikely someone can surprise you with a cock in your mouth. Then again, it's fiction, and you get to make your world when you write fiction, so I'll change my tune.
Bite it dude! Bite it off!
The author did a very poor job on this ugly story. In fact the author has some serious gay issues mixed with some cuckold issues that were transported to this ugly story.
This story lacks of creativity, nonsense, shallow, low context, poor written and it is not even hot nor sexy story.
This story is not enjoyable and it is such waste of time reading all the way through.
Your story sucks, please stop. You may think you are progressing with some sort of plot or character sketch or whatever, but it is just an old middling tale of skanky wife, disrespect, and a manless male. Leave the deep analysis to other who do it well. Sorry Dawg, but its really bad,
Do Something else! Romance, stroke story, burn the bastard, anything to use your potential better!!! OldBearSwitch
As a 50 year old man I can guarantee no man will start being a cuckhold after 50. Maybe this story sound good in your head, but it sucks in print. I wouldn't bother to read anymore of this insanity.
The story doesn't work. It's a bad story, badly told. I almost never give a 1* rating as I'll quit before finishing something completely odious. I should have done that here but for some reason, I read it all. It got worse I'm sorry to say.
It is too much
Too much disrespect
Too much disgusting behaviour that has no place in a marriage.
Or on Literotica
Maybe it would have been better if you built up from chapter 1 to the point they got to into chapter 2, Also probably alot more details, and character buildup, funny you mentioned JennyGently, She seems to be one of the best writers of these cuckold stories.. I'll continue on to chapter 3 though, now I have to see what happens to this poor shmuck LOL so you at least captured my interest.
One bite and it all would have ended right then. Tony would have learned a lifelong lesson. His friend would have been horrified and the wife could just go to hell at that point.
He wins by dumping her and moving on. Tony would have met my friends - Smith and Wesson.
Geez, even more stupid than the last installment...quit while you're behind.
I wake up with a dick in my mouth and I've still got teeth, there will be blood followed by someone's death. The bitch would have to also die.
I have absolutely no idea why the author thought this sickening shit would be entertaining, the story turned to shit with the last lines of the first chapter, but this here is just ludicrous.
Why the hell didn't he kill or at least try to get some kind of revenge on the guys that had him drugged and orally raped him?
This chapter is all about him taking it like a bitch, one big LW cliche.
Honestly, I'm thinking that the author is trolling the readers, it's that bad.
What a bunch of shit by a pervert idiot!!!
Is this you and what happened to you in your married life.? She can cheat and maybe forgive her because of the love, but a real man with sound mind will not and would not allowed a dick in his mouth. I'm sure, he will raise hell and chaos to destroy the two men who put their dick in your mouth. Maybe kill them. So maybe it was you in this story to think like this because duh it's really gross.
Suck so no score.
Remember chapter one husband is filled with shock and outrage and Promises of violence vengeance....
And for no reason suddenly the husband sides okay I'll let the wife keep fucking other men while she stays married to me and then chapter 2 you shocking Outreach husband's now swallowing another man's cock in his face and he has no idea why this happened
But he thinks he's winning the battle????
If Your wife of 30 years keeps fucking other men in front of you then tortures you and and has you ganged raped by other men ..... You're not winning anything
from the beginning of being awake and realizing what was happening they would have all died. but, since i would have put the bitch on the curb a year earlier it never would have happened. damned cuck shit.
You lost me soon as I started the 2nd chapter. A wimp ass cuck. No thanks
If LOVE means allowing that kind of shit to happen to you...
Better to never being in love. Ever.
There's quite literally six moments retold by the cuckold here where, if it happened to me, I would definitely found a way to kill Traci. I'm not even kidding here - I would have killed the bitch and every single one of her playmates as soon as humanly possible, make their bodies disappeared, and go the rest of my life, acting like OJ, claiming my innocence while everybody knew I did it.
I have never loved anyone in my whole entire life enough to let them to the most benign betrayal the cunt subjected her cuck here... and I truly hope I never do.
For my sake, but, especially, hers.
Yup, mental midget here......do you write with the pencil lodged in your ass?
he wakes up and realizes he has a dick in his mouth ! BITE the dam thing off, after police and emt collect the wounde file charges and get a drug test done and file charges on the whole group. just one hard bite down and all the fun and games are over. Along with the marriage.b598
you lose a bet that said you had to write a series that made you look like a sick putz?
bite that damn thing off when you wake up and find that thing in your mouth. WTF?
This author is either a gigantic troll. Or a twisted fuck that writes like shit.
Any heterosexual man who wasn't a complete sub, would either just have bitten down hard once he realised what was in his mouth, or just started punching like crazy.
The author seems to be The gaylord of The cucks from planet cuck! Every Time u think it can't get worse ... U Come alone And post this! Did u Ever had contact with a Woman? I Mean The ones without dicks! Do Live in Ur mothers basement? How old are u?
Think about it. He wakes up choking, mouth full. What does any man do? He bites Tony's cock off. ANYONE does that. End of story. The rest was complete bullshit.
What a loser! Can't even imagine thinking I loved somebody enough to let it go that far.
to put yer fuckin teeth in wimp ? 8 inch dick into 4 inch dick---chomp...
I am tired of the , " But I Totally Love her and could not live without her" Crap Look Love doesn't equal doormat. This i am staying because i love her is nonsense pure and simple
Is.one weak,wimpy, cuck idiot. Wife is a stone whore. What a terrible story.
Words escape me how anyone could put up with the crap in this part of the story..... As Clint famously said - its time for smith wesson and me to put a stop to this crapola.
You have written. I had to just scroll to the bottom to type this. Signed: BTW
post ur gay fetish wimp shit somewhere else and not loving wifes gaylord
I’ve read stories like this before and they all fall down on a very simple fact, putting a dick in an unwilling mouth is inherently dangerous because the mouth contains an ideal weapon for the invasion. Just bite down hard and it’s message received lol
No, I didn't like some of the things she did, but it wasn't my life. Hubby was, shall I say annoyed with it, but stayed, why, because he didn't want to loose her. Call it love, if you want. Some guys would have gone for it, some obviously not, according to the comments. I wish him well.
When 1000 monkey's are out in a room with 1000 typewriters. Certainly not hamlet. Utter nonsense.
I have been in some bad situations but waking up to what this guy did would have wound up with a dock getting bitten OFF! See what that does for sleaze queen and her pieces of meat.
Chapter starts with the idiot sucking dick, did his wife have all his teeth pulled out while he was out.
The human jaw has been recorded exerting pressure in the range of 170 to 270 ppsi pretty sure he could have made short work of any fleshy object inserted, so perhaps he was to busy enjoying the experience and didn’t want it to stop.
I normally like your stuff, but I can only hope you redeem yourself in the following stories. If I woke up with a dick in my mouth, I'd bite down with everything I had to try and sever it. I might be beaten; I might even die but it would be worth it. Why didn't he move into a separate bedroom?
It is a shame that there is no worse rating than 1 *. This crap would be worth - (minus) 5 *!
Dipshit deserved it for being a dumbass. Little pussy should have bitten the damn thing off.
Read this again, and I'm pretty sure Hooked was hacked. He could not possibly have written this.
This can’t be possible in real life, I mean I can’t begin to believe anyone would take that and not go all 'Lizzie Borden' with an ax on mutha fuckers!
Great heart-warming story of true love and "real life". BTBAAC may not like it but real men real connoisseur of artistic cuck-raac stories like Legit Cuck-yeah Nostra and Cuckmaxos and Odiouser have most definitely enjoyed this story. 5 stars! Keep more cuck raacs coming!
I have no sympathy for the sky hes deserving everything that hes getting and then some.
Thus us ridiculous, they invented guns to protect you so why isn’t he shooting them? If I was on his jury, he would be found not guilty.
I’ve never read a story on Literotica that turned my stomach as badly as this one.
Read no more of thosP. O. S.
Bill S.
This is total sickening BS heart-wrenching stomach-turning disgusting crap and should have been stricken and refused by Litertoica!!!!!!!
Wish there were NEGATIVE STARS??????? About a negative -10 or worse!!!!
As good as many of your stories are, this is absolutely the worst and probably one of the worst we have ever read on this site!!!!!!
You sure you didn’t have some dipstick perverted ghost writer for this one?????
You have lost all your appeal to us as a writer and sunk to the lowest level of crapola way below any other disgusting level of sick porn!!!!!
We canceled you off our author list and moved on to anything that is not nauseous, repulsive, abhorrent and revolting♠️♠️♠️♠️♠️
Hope you are lucky enough to survive your brain tumor and get the Dick out of your throat so you can again communicate intelligently……….
This writer does nothing but spew total shit from a keyboard. Every single Mc always loses the ability to think or act while wifey is blowing him, every single Mc always reacts mildly or not at all to total disrespect. Talk about a formula. Everything is a repeat in different order. Worthless in every detail.
"It's really tough to be pissed at her with her lips wrapped around your dick". Not when she's a walking disease from fucking half the population. Fucked story!
Part one was a good scene setter but part two is a train wreck and I'm shocked that such BS as this could be spewed out by an author whose work I normally enjoy reading. I know love makes fools of us all but there is a limit to just what anyone is prepared to tolerate and continuing to love and live with someone who has drugged you, rendered you helpless then aided and abetted a serious sexual assault to be carried out on you simply doesn't fly. Then there is "It's really tough to be pissed at someone with her lips wrapped around your dick." Really? Do all men have such one track minds that they can't grasp when they are being manipulated? Especially when the woman doing the manipulating is a dangerously sick psychopath like this one. Pathetic.
How does this Drek even rate a three whatever. The tags placed are completely misleading and fraudulent. Author is a gutter dweller for playing tag games.
How does this Drek even rate a three whatever. The tags placed are completely misleading and fraudulent. Author is a gutter dweller for playing tag games.