All Comments on 'You Can't Deny Your Wolf Ch. 05'

I find your story jumps a lot and comes across very straight forward without eroticism. I'll keep watching new updates to see how much of Julie that Dap and his wolf get to enjoy and how you write the next part of the story line. Keep going :) I do find the whole idea quite interesting.

To bad all of a sudden we are in ghetto land.

You need an editor and reading dub and turk's lines makes my head hurt.

Up to them speaking like ghetto hood rats this story was okay to good, now it's in the poor to awful area.