All Comments on 'You Shouldn't Be Here'

as ever pal. Five stars well-earned. I know just what it takes to sustain a story for so long, with never a slip in the tension and dirty sexual arousal.

I seldom urge a writer to take the story further, but Stephanie deserves a follow-up.

...even one lousy percent of the writers here could write the way you do...

Well written, and great use of language and vocabulary.