All Comments on 'You Shouldn't Be Here'

...even one lousy percent of the writers here could write the way you do...

Well written, and great use of language and vocabulary.

as ever pal. Five stars well-earned. I know just what it takes to sustain a story for so long, with never a slip in the tension and dirty sexual arousal.

I seldom urge a writer to take the story further, but Stephanie deserves a follow-up.