All Comments on 'Young Amber - Slut Girlfriend'

The fantasy dream of every older single Man. A hot young 20 something totally devoted to him.

HMMM -- slutty clothes, dirty talk, nice blow job ...

Why am I not turned on?

Because there is nothing else?

Erotic stories are better if the women aren't so blonde and perfect and sex-crazy, because everyone knows those types get fucked all the time and no-one really cares. in fact, perfect blonde slutty types bore the shit off people's tits.

nice.

Had marked this one a while ago, but I'm unsure about it now...

A few spelling mistakes (including some words spelled multiple different ways), dialogue issues (full paragraphs with no noting of change between that & telling of story, periods after punctuation & quotation marks), & a personal pet peeve that is oft-repeated on this site: Allusion to at least one more time that is never written about (why I haven't started reading your "Top 10" set).