All Comments on 'Amy and Ron Ch. 01'

Careful Ron!

Just another crappy cluck story on cuckerotica.

He's got this georgous fiancée and all he wants is for her to get groped and possibly fucked by other men?? He's gonna lose her and then cry in his beer!

Sick to death of wimpy chucks if this is true god help this country, worlesley, sad author Ron is a freak and don't deserve her, most women would dump the faggot

When are all you cucks going to fuck off so we're not inundated with this shit.

Get a life, guys. It's a story about fooling around. The hero's out of the country and enjoys encouraging his uptight fiancé to explore her sexuality. Who knows where they'll end up...

oops big tactical error. TK U MLJ LV NV

Don't waste your time. If this is anything like the writer's other stories, the girl is a slut and the guy is screwed over and humiliated. More closet cuck.

Just more of the same Gee, Let's see wht going to happen? Doesn't take a rocket scientist to figure this one out. Predictably bad plotline. BTW Not erotic either95

Doncha just love assholes who can't stand people who dare to have a different opinion, If anyone needs to get a life it's this moron.

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Ya like the story? Fine. Ya don't like the story? Fine.

Author's attempt to hold his audience until chapter 2, where the formulaic cuckold/slut marriage continues. Yawn.

He is about to lose his girl?

You wrote 4parts to call girl in 2008. Guy mets hooker falls in love .guy Marry's hooker. Day after wedding now wife is upset with him over some jealous story she made up on Ian her pimp. Her fault !now she is upset ,he said something totally justified. But she calls Ian to pick her up and gave the wedding ring back. You never finished the story and we are left hanging. Is it over and does she return to being a whore. So can you write the finish to that story.?what did she expect from him living that lifestyle just to end a promising life together?

LOTS MORE loved it many more chapters please. Just don't hurry, that would spoil it

Yet another story about a stupid WACC. Gee how many of these formula stories do we need?

pure garbage

1* cuz I can't give less.

But your writing reads like English isn't your first language. Try reading your stuff aloud before committing to it and pressing upload.

good start. Look forward to the next instalment.

keep it going, it started off great

Wonderful story. This is exactly how my wife and I started down this path; we had a long distance relationship for over a year, then got married, and moved in together.

She is an extremely attractive woman and I encouraged her to continue to attend parties with her friends. She screwed numerous guys during our courtship and told me all the details, when we had phone sex together. It was so hot, we just never stopped once we got married. It is even more fun now, because I get "silky seconds" with her after her dates.

Hope the little gal in this story heads the same direction. There is nothing more exciting than turning a conservative, demure girl into a raving hot wife. Keep writing!

Written like a second grade reader. "Maybe you can touch his cock and make.it hard!" ' "Oh yes dear!" " I can touch his cock and make it hard! " " See me touch his cock and make it hard? " See Spot run! See Spot run after Jane!