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All Comments on 'Zach's Nieces Ch. 04: By the Pool'

by ZachDocEight

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
GET AN EDITOR!!

Kept losing track of what you were intending to say because you kept either miss-spelling words or just using wrong words for the context!

I guess those who 'favorited' it must have a poor and uncritical reading ability!!

SexlessStiffSexlessStiffabout 6 years ago
I must agree

I agree with what anon said. It seemed like a rough draft.

Maybe better next time.

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