All Comments on 'Zain's Little Harem'

Second, this was boring as hell. Look at me, look how great I am, I have a harem I am so wonderful.

Dude, we don't care. We want to read sex stories and jerk off but you had to go and ruin it.

waiting for orders to kill a woman or child. Hey towel head go fuck a camel or sheep

...and delete the comments from the brain-dead moronic assholes who tell you to kill yourself. Seriously. Deleting their comments is like scooping up your dog's shit. Think of it as a community service.

As for your story, I don't really care for it, because everything happened far too easily. Even a fantasy like this one has to be somewhat realistic to be enjoyed.

Can't say more.

You REALLY need an editor. The writing was horrible and the story line really needs a lot of work. The Kama Sutra? Really? UGH!

And harems aren't open marriage unless his wife is out getting fucked by other men. Even if you ignore that stupidity the story is just rambling nonsense. Zero sexy, zero plot, zero characters worth liking. Hell even his wife is so boring he has to find other women.

Get out of your moms basement and get a life dude.

This is juvenile...All fantasies: 1st - be an architect...2nd - Travelling around the world, when what happens is the Middle East needs architects, engineers and so on...3rd - To have a wife that likes women as much as he does...4th - Why wasn't he in his juvenile fantasy a Sheik full of money and wives? Finally: His name could be from any part of the world...So 1*

It is an arab dude???

I've seen much worse writing in some whore wife/bull crap stories...

What if the character was just black or maybe a white person with a harem?

Would there be the same amount of hate??

Btw this isnt an actual story.

Just sounds like a random perverted dream of an eternal virgin....

I never read the story, but these comments are fucking hilarious and far more entertaining than the story. Surely. Keep up the good work guys. Keep the comments coming.

is of that perverted cuckold swingerjoe. Who are you bullshitting, you love stories like this.

Wrong category, rushed story, and poor writing doesn't make for much of a story. That is sad, as I see potential for a good story hidden in there.