All Comments on 'Zoeloves'

by Melody

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Good start

Nice start to the story. I'd hate to see Joe die, or be hurt by Zoe's infatuation with her boss, however.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
magnificent

fantastic storyline - please give us more

GoodWifeyGoodWifeyabout 19 years ago
Here we go again

start of another standard run-of-the-mill cheating wife story.

What about a bit of imagination???

Oh, sorry to ask too much.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Zoeloves

Very hot and well written. Keep it coming. SUM12WATCH.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Great start

Great start, Melody. Too early to tell where it is going, but it was very pleasant to sit back and get to know your characters. Not a lot of that going on at Literotica.

Take your time. Don't listen to ANYBODY, pro or con. Enjoy the experience and that will assure that we will too.

Nightowl22Nightowl22about 19 years ago
Virtual, right?

As long as they exchange stories and nothing more they can be as sexual as they like. But, they tell me, it is still cheating. Thinking of cheating is the same as doing it!

Well, we'll keep an eye on this one.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
well

please continue and we shall see if it remains fantasy or not...

enovelistenovelistabout 19 years ago
Enticing...maybe

Nice set-up for a possibly good story line. Or, it could be just another "rehashed" frustrated loving wife who needs a "different" bed partner.

I hope the writer has thought this one through to the end. One more chapter should tell us where the story is headed.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I simply can't get into stories involving fat women.

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