All Comments on 'Zoe's Awakening Pt. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
A bit of an overkill

I liked the first four parts, but you went a bit far with the husband humiliation. Seemed a bit redundant.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
revenge

If Mark had any pride or balls he would find out where they were, wait till they are fucking, jam a shotgun up Pages ass, and blow both their sets of genitals into the next room. Then Mark could walk away and never look back........

I'm sorry, looking at porn on a computer does not justify this kind of humiliation and degradation from a so called "loving" wife. She should have told her husband about Pages threats and her less than stellar past. Mark would have been hurt and angry, but they could have dealt with it together, including having Page fired and probably getting a monetary settlement from the company. No, deep down inside she wanted this... They both need to pay.

PS. I know it's just a story :) But since it's just a story, finish Page and Zoe off gloriously!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
The story is about Zoe.

Zoe has made her choices and decided to be the person who can humiliate Mark that way. The cuck porn is just a bit of self-justification; she'd have done it gladly anyway and she knows it. For those who want her punished, I expect that will begin when Page dumps her for his next slut.

Baby_MalenaBaby_Malenaalmost 9 years ago
She's Free

She didn't love Mark, and while he'll likely be confused and miserable for a while, I'm glad she left him; she needed to be free and he deserved to be free of her as well. And come on - we know Page won't keep her around forever, but he obviously cares for her right now. She deserves the confusion and misery coming her way when he leaves her, but for now, she's satisfied. I really connected with both Page and Zoe, having been on both ends of similar needs (but nothing even close to this situation). Good story, and the cuckolding at the end was a subtly masterfully touch - it's hard to feel bad for a man being humiliated when he clearly enjoys being humiliated. Looks like he and Zoe had more in common than either of them ever realized.

greenman440greenman440about 5 years ago
mmmm delightful story

Such love shown by the slut wife. He had a very lucky escape, she showed her true colours before they had kids etc. Now he can move on and find a decent women to settle down with.

She can get a job more suited to her skills, ...at the local whorehouse

Perfect all round.

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