All Comments on 'Damn Dress: A Love Story Ch. 10'

thanks so much for writing this great story! not to be greedy but will there ever be a lori and john story?

Darren was right about the Lakers. Celtics also haven't won a championship since

This author should definitely publish this book on Amazon. Great storyline the characters are amazing and relatable..A winner in my book…

What a great story, amongst he very best I have read on this site and I am amazed that this is the author's first effort. Well done.

Kinda hangin' at the end. ⭐⭐⭐⭐

I love your work. Thank you for writing.

I hope you see this but this story as well as Seven Days are on Amazon Kindle under the name Bustee Wilde. The stories are almost verbatim. Damn Dress the main character names have changed. Seven Days nothing had changed. I just don't want someone to profit off of your great stories that you let us read for free.

I held my comments to the last part of the story. So here goes.

SEALs require a level of self-discipline that is almost super human. Yes, they can cut loose on liberty like no other, and yeah, there is the occasional dumb ass that somehow makes it through the training and gets a Budweiser. But those are few and far between. SEALs work in teams of eight, and platoons of sixteen. Operations that require onesy/twosy deployments are handled by the Army SF detachment that doesn't exist (cough Delta, cough) rather than SEALs. People with anger issues don't make good operators. They get themselves killed rather quickly, and if everyone is lucky, only they get themselves killed.

SEALs do use SIGs, but not the M-11/SIG 228. They use SIG 226/MK25s, various 1911 models, and certain Glocks on occasion if you're one of the "special" SEALs. Unstable personalities can make for good storytelling, but lousy SEALs.

Great story soular. Looking forward to your next addition on Lori and John. Best wishes. To bad this writer and others have faded into the dunset so to speak.

I'm finding this story 13 years later, I have to say that I finished reading it but I keep going back to the wonderful characters. I hope you come back, Dear Soular, because I need more BT!!!

I'd love to see BT handle his daughter dating, to watch the Commander gloat and Darrien and Tasha laughing at his frustrations, of course, Sienna continuing to keep him calm. Lol

This is one of the best stories on this site. I have reread it many times. It is worth publishing. You are a talented writer. Please continue writing. We are all hoping for updates or new stories. Keep on writing. You have an appreciative audience.

I freaking ADORED this story!!!!! So much drama. So much love. And a happy ending. Well, the romantic kind lol!!!!

I would love to see where Lori and John go. And Ian. And even Chris, the little shit. Ooh and maybe a story about Darren & Tasha and how they met.

You’re an amazing writer. Keep it up!!!!!

I remembered when I first came across this years ago and I just couldn’t put it away the same goes for Seven Days; just loved theses two. Like always I want the continuation of Damn Dress and Seven days. Pretty Please.

Please write more! Between 7 days, damn dress and the unfinished Gabrielle, we need more content!

Woooooooooooooooooow this is a great piece good work, that's work well done. Can't wait for more

When I need a good romance I come back to this and Seven Days...I wish you'd gift us with some new stories, perhaps Lori and John or the teaser you left us with at the end of Seven Days...but if not I will continue to treasure the stories of Sienna and BT and Nick and Victoria...thank you Soular, be blessed wherever you are as you've blessed us.

Peace

Love Damn Dress and Seven Days, I read both often.

Would love to see how John and Lori's story unfold?!

I must say soular between Seven days and Damn dress I can't get enough. Years later, nothing new from you but I find myself up late at night reading these two stories. I fucking love BT thats my dude he reminds me of myself. That anger that intensity. But then I love Nick and his cocky attitude. Still great reads can't wait to see something new if your still out there writing. I even was inspired to write my own. Hope to see some someone as dedicated to my books as I am to yours.

This is such a wonderful story. Soular needs to publish ASAP

I so enjoyed this story so much. I hope to have in ebook form someday 👌🏾

Omg this story was just absolutely amazing! The details, the drama, the sexiness of this story is just so overwhelming in the best way! I agree with another comment that said they want more on John and Lori. They seem perfect for each other, and if you do end up writing a story for them I'll be the first to read! Also an update years later with Sienna, BT, and Brienna!

Side Note:

Is it just me or did anyone notice that Sienna suddenly knew how to drive Brandons Jeep when his dad was there? Lol I'm just being a creep

I've read this story more than 20times.... I love it so much.

Can we get something in John and Lori?

It would be amazing if you could write a story about Lori and John !!

I can't adequately express how much I enjoyed the entire series! Its beautifully written, romantic, with a boat load of drama and HOT! I was literally shouting at my screen on more than a few occasions. You made fall in love with Sienna & Brandon. Thank you!

I enjoyed this very much. You have great skill and I am grateful you took the time and made the effort to create these characters and story. I you conveyed the tension of their separation vividly. I hope you write more.

I loved loved loved it! My only issue is that I want MORE! Bravo!!!

This could also be published mainstream, with some downplaying on some bed scenes. I wouldn't be surprised if it ended up in one of those bestsellers lists. I enjoyed it immensely.

Definitely one of the best stories I have read, wish you were writing more.

I like the concept...too much crying though, that was the 'eh' part for me. A little confusing at times cause some of the happenings were surreal. But overall a lovely story.

I have read this story many times over the years. Whenever I've needed to just sample someones love and let it seep into me, I turn to your stories. I wish, fervently, that you will return and share more of your gifts but I also understand that life always manages to get in the way. Know that you are truly talented and truly missed. For whatever reason Gabriella has never appealed to me while Damn Dress and Sven Days have become staples when I need to stave off a little reality for the fantasy that was never mine yet always desired.

Again, I reiterate that we miss your sharing your gift with us but until you do, thank you for these wonderful gems of beautiful, dysfunctional romance.

Peace

I started this story just wanting a something that would be hot, never intending to read more than the first chapter but I ended up reading all of them in one sitting! I just wanted to say I loved it! I don't ever really comment but I just wanted to say thanks and this is amazing story.

This was an amazing story, thank you.

I was sad to this come to an end. I was expecting more at the end. I'm going to have to make my own ending. I'm not to except this is it for them.

KEEP GOIN' THIS IS FAR FROM OVER !!!!!!!!

Beautiful!

Awesome stuff

mate i realy love your Story. i read the whole stuff in under 3 days at work and the intensity of the Story made the time fly. you had the right idea abiut your Story. stories with simple pattern (they see eachother, they fuck, they marry, the end) are boring like hell and literotica is full of them BUT you put so much Drama in your Baby that it hurts to read it some times (espacialy the whole bar and brandons house Scene before she went to Hospital) but because of the Drama thats a damnd realistic Story. i give you the 5 stars you earn totaly and look Forward to read more stories from you.

I have read this story several times and each time I read this chapter I wish I could find out more about John and Lori. Please come back & do a story for them !!!

I loved this story stayed up all night reading . you have talent bit and would love to read more of this story as others have suggested. What happens with Brandon's dad ? Does Sienna finish school ? Just a little more please :)

LOVED IT... you had me the whole way.

superb storytelling

I remember having to wait for chapters of this book and getting all excited. 7 years on I still come back lol die hard lit readers I'm sure I'm not alone

I just finished reading your story and loved it. However it would have been nice if there had been an epilogue......maybe like four years later say at siennas graduation, brandon recalls their wedding, Briennas birth and how he feels at being a father, how proud he is with what siennas has accomplished and how sienna has been offered a job at a publishing company etc. it would have given it a more rounded feel and just how at peace Brandon had come to be.

Nice but seemed unfinished

Just for visualization. Nuff said.

WE NEED MORE. THIS WAS AMAZING

every now and then i just come back to read this lovely story again.

I also read the entire series in one setting. I was up all night. I'm married and still waiting for my Brandon to come around.

I absolutely love this story. Couldn't stop reading it. You did a great job for your first story. Wish it didn't end. Brandon sexy as hell lol. I can totally see Leo D. Playing that character lol. Excellent job!!!!!

Love this story! I'd really love to see it published as a novella or book someday! I read a lot, and I'd say your writing is definitely on par with a lot of other books I've read that were published by big companies :) And I'd really love to read some future stories about some of the side characters, like Lori and John. And maybe a small short story about how Darren met his love. And I'd like to see Ian happy too lol. Can't wait to see what the future holds for your characters!

This is the second story I have read in one sitting. ...you are amazing! !

This is a great story..but I really wish you would think about creating a seperate story for Lori&John now :) keeping my fingers crossed!

I just read the whole series in one sitting. All that I can say is WOW! This was an emotional rollercoaster that was well written. The characters were engrossing and the organization of the series was solid. Great Work. Thanks for sharing your creation.

Now this wrapped it up quite nicely: Sienna is the cause but also the resolution, which was the logical use of her when she got Brandon out of his claustrophobia in the shower. That's why that one chapter on her torturing him was so out of place and illogical. I like how you brought the Commander back in after having kind of sidelining him, bringing him back to his true fatherly role. All in all, well concluded for sure--and certainly how Sienna and Brandon wanted each other was something we can all hope we experience. :)

Perfect ending. Perfect story. Perfect author.

You still writing?

I envy those who will read this story for the first time. What a ride they have in store for themselves. Simply wonderful, start to finish.

This needs to be published as an actual book then adapted into a movie. I went through all my emotions throughout the whole story and it was really refreshing to read something this good in a while

I wish there was a rating higher than a five!!! It was an amazing story from start to finish. I was enthralled the whole time. It was realistic, funny, romantic, heartbreaking, and sexy all in one. You are truly a gifted writer and I can't wait to devour more of your work. I would love to see an epilogue of this story just to tie up loose ends. Marvelous!!!!!!

You leave the readers feeling like they know the characters and wish they could meet them in person. Although men are not supposed to get tearful I had the urge several times in between the laughs. It's easy for the reader to imagine the future of the main characters. Very well and very talented done. Bravo.

I loved it. You are a talented writer. Please continue this story

This was a great series. I needed one about now.

My one question is why it's in the interracial category. This is a romance that just happens do have some occasionally mentioned skin color differences.

Regardless, thank you. Off to see what other works you have contributed.

>.< so new year new chapter? ;] how bout part two???

Would love to have another chapter or 3 about when Brienna arrives

Also Chris seems like he could cause trouble, and what about J&L?

I adored this story! You are amazing and talented! Continuation possibly? Pretty pleaaaase... :)

This is so cute please have another chapter i love this

Fell completely in love. Great job.

I was so annoyed with Brandon's boorish behavior that I really was hoping the final mission be the end of him; or, at least in subsequent chapters see him develop some redeeming qualities suitable to what the Commander and Sienna saw in him. But, it is just a story so I'm not losing sleep over it. I do commend you on the mighty effort it took to write such a lengthy story keeping things straight and adding supporting details. #tip of the hat

Wolfie

I think I can see a love story developing between Lori and John??? Don't u think it would make for a great love story??? Anywho, I really enjoyed reading this story. Thank u so much.

"BS

All these bullshit stories about married white women supposedly liking getting abused by black thugs! Go out and make a real difference in the world!

W.A.R."

You might want to read the story before commenting. I hope you didn't vote.

You DEFINITELY need to write a sequel to this, though I'm not sure if you could outdo it. Great character development, all the way around, and I literally couldn't stop reading until I finished all 10 chapters. You should consider expanding on it and shopping it around to some publishers.

This is definately my favorite story on literotica. I read it years ago and I still like to read it. Please if you can , write a chapter or even a few more chapters. I really want to know how being married and have a daught has changed Brandon. I wonder if he has softened..... You are such a great writer.

I enjoyed this story so much. Really its in my top 3. Can you plz write a few chapters more with birth of the baby. Plz.

Amazing ending!

Does anybody besides me feel that the song by the Lumineers "Ho Hey (I belong with you, you belong with me)" is definitely the right one for either of the scenes from Chapter 4 or Chapters 9 - 10?!

This is my third identical comment today, and this from a sistah girl, so get the hint Soular!!! lololol

This story never ever gets old!!!! This was my very first story on LitE that I read and them seven days followed....both are my favs & I always come back to them!!!! I'm holding on by the day for the sequel that you've been talking about and I love these stories!!! They'll never get old but oh how I'm anticipating the new story too!! Eekkk lol

I've been late to work, not calling my parents, barely eating all because of this story. If this were a short film I'd die.

I could tell you that Chris should never have been at the Christmas party (his character should be history, he's just a dick) or that Ian should have signed up, that Sienna, even at 18, should have been a tad stronger. I could tell you that their first encounter was soooo perfect, that the sexual tension was incredibly thrilling, that the emotional rollercoaster had me on the edge from the start. However, it wouldn't express to you how thoroughly enjoyable this piece was. I would be thrilled to read more.

"I'm hard to love, hard to love, ya I don't make it easy...."

I love all your stories, you're an amazing writer, I read this story so many times and I don't get bored that's how you know it's good!! 5 stars all the way!!

When they were playing cards that reminded me of the movie baby boy. Ive read this story lik 20 times n i still love it.

I absolutely love this story! You are a brilliant writer! I would love to read about Lori and John!

Still one of my favorite stories. Can you do a prologue that show Sienna & Brandon life after the baby's birth. Just a few chapters please. I just don't want it to end...

I'm sad it has ended. I cried, I got turned on. I simply love the story.

I love it. It was intense... I came... I cursed... I cried... I'm so totally into it.

You should probably make into a book, Soular. I know some publishers could use your talent.

I love this story! Unputdownable! :)

Loved the story! You should wow one on john and Lori!

You are a fantastic writer! Please please finish this story, I'm so curious to know what's gonna happen next! Keep up the good work!!!

I ABSOLUTELY LOVED THIS STORY! I usually don't read books but I was drawned to the title! I laughed, cried, and imagine as a movie inside my head! You definitely need to finish this and publish it. It could be bigger than Fifty Shades of Grey! I really enjoyed this! I even told my mom about it and she's reading it. I agree with others, this needs to be made into a movie! I want someone like Brandon! I think any women would want a man like this! Please please keep making stories like this and please continue finishing this story. I will buy this book if you publish it! I promise you that! I may have went over board but this story was so damn good!!! Keep up the good work!!!

I stayed up all night reading it to the end! This and SEVEN DAYS are the best stories on here!! I have told all my friends to read them! ENGROSSING!!! I was on the emotional roller coaster ride with all the characters. I even cried sometimes....lol When will we see a story about LORI and JOHN? Commander Jackson needs a good woman too and eventually I would love Brienna and Michael to grow up and have a life love affair! You are really talented!!!

Great story, all around. Never could get into these "chapter stories", but this one hooked me. Kudos to you sir.

You're an AMAZING WRITER. I don't think any other story here has made me laugh so much. Love, love, love this story. It's sooo real. It's sounds like someone's real life story. Brandon comes across as sexy and hot as hell! Someone that I would probably lust after just like Sienna :) Thanks for sharing your AWESOME GIFT!!!

One of the best stories here =)

I was stuck on the characters in Seven Days and actually read the story from beginning to end 3 times. I thought I wouldn't find another story that would captivate me, but I once I read the first chapter of this story, I was hooked and didn't stop until I was done!!! I loved how you intermixed characters from seven days with the characters in this story... Great work!!! Waiting for more :)

My absolute favorite on this site!!! Kudos to you!

It's almost sad how much I loved and cried over this story. Afterphs the first few paragraphs I stopped reading it for the sex. This is one of the best stories, as a matter of fact the best story I've ever read on here. I loooved this, I feel like such a girl but oh my goodness I can't help it. I cried everytime Sienna cried and when Brandon broke down. Thank you so much for writing this, you're amazing!

snifff sniiifffff.. please.. let me have my moment here.

Impressive comment. I couldn't agree more.

This was a great piece of writing: a good plot; plenty of conflict; ample resolution; enough insight into characters' thoughts to let us know why things were happening and guess what might happen next, without letting the action get bogged down; and wonderful characters. (Lori was a real piece of art!) The sex was motivated well, and described well without getting in the way of the story.

Harold's appearance was a shock. BT's ability to deal with him and Terry without going to prison was a telling demonstration of his progress. In the end the good guys came out on top and everybody will live happily ever after, which is what we always hope for.

A very good read. Thank you for writing it for us!

Your writing leaves me speechless. I read this story and Seven Days like every week over and over again

I've been a fan of yours for quit some time and I've enjoyed reading all of your stories. What i'm "patiently" waiting for is John and Lori's story:-) Absolutely loved it!

Wow! What an amazing story!! Honestly! It was a real page turner! I can't wait 2 read more of yo stories! U'r really talented! Keep it up!

I didn't know what to expect when I started this story but figured I'd give one chapter a try. I read the whole thing!!! I thoroughly enjoyed it, I can't wait to read more of your work.