All Comments on 'Last Chance'

by LesLumens

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rachlourachlouover 17 years ago
Wonderful story!

I loved the sparks of humour in there, made an already romantic story much more interesting.

Good luck!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Very funny!

Witty and comic, a nice break from reality.

Good luck in the contest,

Maharat

starrkersstarrkersover 17 years ago
Top Stuff

What a rollicking good read! Loved the dog. Wonderfully whimsical little story.

MunachiMunachiover 17 years ago
very nice

enjoyed it a lot, very funny story!

RogueLurkerRogueLurkerabout 17 years ago
This one has me grinning ear to ear

Great story, Les. Had me smiling all the way through.

deathlynxdeathlynxabout 17 years ago
Laughing constantly...

Absolutely hysterical! I couldn't stop laughing...it's a great feeling to bring some joy to a miserable holiday ;)

scriptordelectoscriptordelectoabout 17 years ago
OMG!

I reaaallly needed that laugh! Marvelously witty! Script

Selena_KittSelena_Kittabout 17 years ago
Ha!

You and I SOOOOOOO have the same sense of humor!! And I thought I loved your LST3K's! :D This was great--loved it!

SuggestionSuggestionover 6 years ago
One word

Would be five stars but for one word.

You knock on a door.

You nock an arrow.

Good work.

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