All Comments on 'Last Chance'

by LesLumens

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SuggestionSuggestionover 6 years ago
One word

Would be five stars but for one word.

You knock on a door.

You nock an arrow.

Good work.

Selena_KittSelena_Kittabout 17 years ago
Ha!

You and I SOOOOOOO have the same sense of humor!! And I thought I loved your LST3K's! :D This was great--loved it!

scriptordelectoscriptordelectoover 17 years ago
OMG!

I reaaallly needed that laugh! Marvelously witty! Script

deathlynxdeathlynxover 17 years ago
Laughing constantly...

Absolutely hysterical! I couldn't stop laughing...it's a great feeling to bring some joy to a miserable holiday ;)

RogueLurkerRogueLurkerover 17 years ago
This one has me grinning ear to ear

Great story, Les. Had me smiling all the way through.

MunachiMunachiover 17 years ago
very nice

enjoyed it a lot, very funny story!

starrkersstarrkersover 17 years ago
Top Stuff

What a rollicking good read! Loved the dog. Wonderfully whimsical little story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Very funny!

Witty and comic, a nice break from reality.

Good luck in the contest,

Maharat

rachlourachlouover 17 years ago
Wonderful story!

I loved the sparks of humour in there, made an already romantic story much more interesting.

Good luck!

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