- Romance
- Seeing Sophie
- Comments
All Comments on 'Seeing Sophie'
by sophia jane
- 17 Comments
Anonymousover 16 years agoThank you so very much for finally writing something sexy but....no, BECAUSE it is very human, very dear, very alive, and real, and fun, and intelligent.
TxRadover 16 years agoIntelligent, honest, sexy. Real as life.
Damned good job and I can see you in the whole thing.
<3 Tx
LadyCibelleover 16 years agoGreat story. Wonderful writing, so evocative! You paint a very vivid picture with your words, SJ.
Anonymousover 16 years agoNeed some more of this couple. Your story is a pleasure to read. Thanks for the story.
Anonymousover 16 years agoThis was a great story. The characters were great although flipping back and forth between points of view was a little confusing. Can't wait to read more.
elfin_odalisqueover 16 years agoSimply wonderful. Great characters, super story and beautifully written. SJ, a really enjoyable piece - thanks for sharing.
Anonymousover 16 years agoCongratulations! You write a beautiful story. The characters are real and interesting and the plot is wonderfully developed. I don't know any Bi Women but I'm beginning to think,based on my limited experience, that Bi woman write extremely well.
60 year old George
Belegonover 16 years agoIt was wonderful to read this. I enjoyed the characters and the situations, although I must admit that I, like Tex, couldn't help but picture you. I hope you don't mind. *wink*
I really hope the feedback and the validation feed your muse. I want more from you.
~photoguy~over 16 years agowhat a great story .. so real, excellent dialogue, and I luv how you switch POV .. when can we xpect part 2 ??
Anonymousabout 16 years agoNicely written, wonderfully told. I was riveted. Your story was interesting, stimulating and sexual. Sophie is a woman of any man's dreams. Is Sophie you, Sophia Jane?
fifty5about 16 years agoGreat story, SJ.
I just wish it were longer. A few more twists and turns before the final emotional consummation.
Of course, you may have that lined up for future episodes. I hope so.
Whether or not, you deserve that prize.
Scotsman69over 10 years agoabout real people. I wondered at first about the first-to-third person switch, but it worked. A most accomplished piece. Thank you.
