All Comments on 'Seeing Sophie'

Lost on painting of male lovers

about real people. I wondered at first about the first-to-third person switch, but it worked. A most accomplished piece. Thank you.

Love strong smart women, very hot, too....

keep on writing!

Felix

Thank you, I read it and sported wood.

Great story, SJ.

I just wish it were longer. A few more twists and turns before the final emotional consummation.

Of course, you may have that lined up for future episodes. I hope so.

Whether or not, you deserve that prize.

Nicely written, wonderfully told. I was riveted. Your story was interesting, stimulating and sexual. Sophie is a woman of any man's dreams. Is Sophie you, Sophia Jane?

Captured me and never let me go again. Great work!

what a great story .. so real, excellent dialogue, and I luv how you switch POV .. when can we xpect part 2 ??

It was wonderful to read this. I enjoyed the characters and the situations, although I must admit that I, like Tex, couldn't help but picture you. I hope you don't mind. *wink*

I really hope the feedback and the validation feed your muse. I want more from you.

Congratulations! You write a beautiful story. The characters are real and interesting and the plot is wonderfully developed. I don't know any Bi Women but I'm beginning to think,based on my limited experience, that Bi woman write extremely well.

60 year old George

Simply wonderful. Great characters, super story and beautifully written. SJ, a really enjoyable piece - thanks for sharing.

This was a great story. The characters were great although flipping back and forth between points of view was a little confusing. Can't wait to read more.

Need some more of this couple. Your story is a pleasure to read. Thanks for the story.

Great story. Wonderful writing, so evocative! You paint a very vivid picture with your words, SJ.

Intelligent, honest, sexy. Real as life.

Damned good job and I can see you in the whole thing.

<3 Tx

Thank you so very much for finally writing something sexy but....no, BECAUSE it is very human, very dear, very alive, and real, and fun, and intelligent.