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by LenaTrueshield

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lucorientlucorientover 2 years ago

Not bad at all, Loopings Torwart to Part2

MarassoMarassoover 2 years ago

It was really good, enjoyed the reading. My only observation is that you seem to hast things up at cost of the build up and the plot. Of course, not every story has to have a slow developing, complicated storyline, but yours has potential to be something more than simple fuckfest ;)

Looking forward for the continuation, keep up the good work.

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