All Comments on 'VY Ch. 04-07'

Great second part to a captivating story! I'm really looking forward to what happens next at the mansion with the other wives.

Great part 2 to a good story. Thank you.

@mattenw,

How many wives does a fellow need to make you happy! If you haven't seen it yet you need serious help.

You forgot to add speech marks for almost all of the conversations in Chapter 7

I’m sure l read this earlier than 27/2. No doubt about it.

Scores 5/5

Yes, these chapters had been previously published, however these chapters have also gone under significant editing.

Speech marks weren't forgotten, it is a result of formatting being stripped off during publishing here.

Yes, this is infact a Loving Wives story, otherwise the site admin would absolutely have changed it, get over yourselves.

Thanks for the great comments!

Badly written :( I got bored reading it,

The scene with his father-in-law and Daisy was a turn off. Kind of non-consensual as well as she told him not to cum in her but the men both decided to ignore her feelings on the matter. Not really what I am into.