All Comments on 'A Boiled Frog Pt. 07'

All that and no ending? That’s almost criminal.

My ten cents about this story, really sad that we never got it finished, real shame, if it had been it would have been one of if not the best series on here, but the thing that really impressed me was the start. I have never been a fan of stories starting out of time order but the way this was written it was brilliant, because all the way through you felt that the MC was going to lose both Julie and Lisa, but the opening paragraph keeps you engaged as clearly that didn't happen, its the first time ever I think I have seen that tool used effectively.

Finally I would be interested, I assume Dakota was added to proved Ash a love interest and how did people seeing the whole thing going? I was thinking that Tina in the end would become the dominant one of the three

I guess it is too late to beg for the next chapters but I was really enjoying this story!

Hey all!

I have not heard back from anyone else on the project, but I am going to soldier on with it. I am not as fast with my writing as I once was (60-hour work weeks will do that), but I will work on getting *something* done in the next month—even if it is only a summary to act as the first part of a new series that I can actually post to.

As for part 8, he had seven-ish scenes planned between Tina getting home and the Halloween party's aftermath. I will likely split off the first few scenes, build them out a bit more, and post them as Part 8. The Halloween party and what follows will probably be Part 9.

After that, who knows? I would be working from scratch at that point; not like I would be starved for plot hooks. I would still need to deal with Dakota coming to live with Tina and Julie, what Ash's espionage means for Emily, (a number of) lingering issues between Tina, Julie, and Lisa that will definitely take another whole part on their own—if not two—to resolve, Dee's role in things going forward, Tina's (non-)surgeries... I think y'all get the idea.

Will keep y'all posted!

Glad you are back. I was a little dissapointed when you stopped last time and left us all hanging. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Yes please! Love this story, looking forward to reading more

This is one of the best, if not THE best stories I've read on here. VERY compelling, interesting. Good characters, multiple characters, good character development, and realistic. Well done!!! DO please continue writing....Will Tina and Ash ever get together to punish Lisa? Will Tina with her permaboobs "develop" into a perma-dominant character? Dying to read about Tina getting it on with Dee. LOL....haven't been this excited for the next installment in a story since Harry Potter! Great Job!

Great....

What about a story of 5 or 10 years later....sure your fans would want it

Dear author this is a far better level of writing than is usual in this forum. The praise from many readers is warranted. Hope your well of inspiration is nigh to overflowing. Good luck with this and any other writing endeavors you may have going.

Please finish this story. Great reading.

Yes, please finish the story.

Finish the story!!

You are cruel, to "end" it with such a cliffhanger

Still saddened this amazing story was never continued. Hope every thing is all right with Noobdude and he decides to return one day

Hope this Story gets finished someday its so wonderful.

I cant wait when Lisa gets pregnant

There should be a rule put in place that no story could be posted until it is completed. Then they can post the entire story. I am so disgusted by people building up most of a story and then never finishing it. I don’t care what the reason is because that rule would take care of it. If the powers that be wanted to split the site into a completed story section and a section for everything else whether it is never to be completed works or still being worked on stories then that would save those of us that invest our time into reading something just to end up with no ending. It’s like getting a ruined blowjob, getting all worked up and then nothing. It is so damn annoying.

I have really enjoyed this well-written story. It's evolved naturally, and hasn't been repetitive as some other long stories are. I actually care about Tina, and was nervous for her, and what the future holds for her.

Then I sadly realised it was unfinished. shame. If the author manages to continue, or bring Tina's tale to a close, I'm sure there would be a lot of very happy readers, myself included.

just to say thankyou for such a fantastically well written story. considering the topic! you've made the characters seem so real and interesting. but please please please put everybody of of their misery if Julie is leaving Tina for Lisa (the suspense is killing everybody (lol)

you did mention that you work loads of hours. Have you considered starting a patreon site! taking into account your obvious natural talent for fiction. it could be an avenue to a full time living, you might not have considered.

Again thankyou for such a wonderfully engrossing story.

I really hope to see a new chapter of this

I appreciate you've got a very busy work schedule, and all this writing is done purely from a love of writing (i know how tiring 60 hour working weeks can be).

Please take this as a massive compliment! you have many fans dying to know when the next chapter will be released. Do you have any updates regarding this wonderful story please please please.

I just reread this for like the 5th time it is that good. Please finish the story. Your fans are dying to see how it turns out.

This will forever be one of my all favorites, i never did understand what happened, i only wish the author all the best and wish to hear from them again...

Ohhhh, it's so sad the story is not finished. I was becoming my favorite one :( It's so well written and I love the characters. Please please please noobdude, continue it!

swesome story have read it many times and am just looking for a conclusion

Wish there was more great story thus far

This is “the” read when I need a lovely story. Please finish it

This has turned into a fantastic story, but sadly it was to have been completed over 4 years ago. It would appear at this point in time that the story will never be completed. Unfortunately we are left with an itch that will never be scratched.

Veronica

I don't know if its fully abandoned at this point ... But i would love to see a conclusion to this...

Hi, I am guessing from the last date being 2017 that we are not likely to see the end 😭

The story has gripped me and I would love to see our hero come through strong.

I guess I would like to see him break Julie’s heart as she had manipulated him and allowed Lisa to be a control freak 💔

Hears hoping 🙏

Oh we really really need more chapters of this story, please???

Noobdude, I hope you are ok. This is such a wonderful story. Begining of this chapter you said you have part of ch. 8 ready, please publish that if you are at all able. So that we would know a bit more of what happened to Tina. I wish I had a friend like her.

Since this will never get finished, my best guess is that the shakes also drive him hornier, which is why he can’t contain himself.

Lisa will continue to break boundaries ultimately forcing an ultimatum where Tina will have Julie choose. Julie will choose correctly, but ultimately they will allow Lisa back into their lives.

Before all this gets resolved, Tina will look to di for support which coincides with the Halloween party.

Emily’s husband is cheating, and Ash will fall for Dakota.

Hey all, sorry for the radio silence; life, uh, got the best of me for a hot minute.

I have two scenes left to do in my quick and dirty summary of parts one and two. Once that is done, I will post that and a couple of "deleted scenes" from those parts in the near future. Hoping to get the other parts knocked out soon after and to (hopefully) have the first half of part eight (if not more) up before the summer gets too far along.

Wish me luck!

So there is news.... great

My summary for the first arc is posted, and I'm in the midst of annotating part 4. Aiming to have the second arc posted by the end of the month (if not before).

https://literotica.com/s/a-soft-boiled-egg-the-vegas-arc

Loved the whole story

What am Amazing story!!!! 5 years ago now since an update. I thought i read abot part 8 being almost complete. Love this story 😀😀😀😀😀👍👍👍👍

What a fantastic read - and what a lucky ( if rather paranoid ( main subject, God he's a lucky girl. I wish someone would do this to me. God this is one turn on after another ....can't wait for part 8 . Keep going it's marvellous.

Love it! I hope to read more chapters.

Really hope this gets a long awaited conclusion. This story is so good.

So "life is what happens while you're making other plans" is true, yet I'm still patiently waiting, waiting, waiting for the continuation/resolution of this story. Let's just say that I'm not rooting for Lisa and hope she gets her comeuppance and Ash finds her way into Tina's life.

Great story but waiting for the continuation

This story is goated, but it's a shame it will never be finished. It's been 5 years now. This story was so good, but I regret reading it because it's not finished. I haven't felt this way since reading Yours by Backyardbottomslash. Another story unfinished.

By not finishing the story, you ruin the entire story. By shoving in too many things like Incest, you ruin the story. And even though it's a fictional story on a porn site, making it so unbelievable is a disservice to the story and the readers. You may have thought that he "boiled slowly" but is any man or husband or ANYBODY that stupid to let himself be used and abused over and over and over again and not wake up to the abuse, manipulation and disrespect? I think not. Really poorly done. Glad you stopped.

Argh, I should have checked the date posted to know this went to completed story so sad. The way I see it is that Tina was being played by his wife and Lisa from the beginning. They were sitting him up to find a soft landing and I don't know if that sucks landing's going to be would be or Ash but I see Tina finally getting a bigger backbone on leaving Julie and Julie will be devastated and that will break up her and Lisa also cuz apparently they've never separated they've always been playing and lisa is a crazy fuck. And the whole point of bringing in a third person I mean there was so much distress here My Tina is even still with Julie and Lisa I don't understand except for the great sex

So I posted another comment earlier but now going back reading chapter 1 it actually starts in reverse order so we see from that that Tina is Tina has a new job is married now does that mean still married to Julie not necessarily but is married and has a lesbian girlfriend so it leaves a lot to be led to believe that there is some reconciliation going on so can't wait to see if we ever do 5 years later get the rest of each chapters but it is an absolutely great great story not so much for the ancestral part but I understand that there's some people out there that do like that so either way great story and thank you

Great story but still waiting for the rest. Kind of a let down to see it's not done after so many years have passed

Great story except hormone thing. Completely breaks the trust in the relationship and would have made me drop the story if it wasnt dead already.

Great work.. waiting for the rest

I think Julie should have a butt spanked and told to make a decision as if she wants to be with Lisa or she wants to be with her husband neither one or the other is either 1 or the other and not be allowed both and if she wants her husband he should be with her only The following program contains scenes of violence viewer discretion is strongly advised

Hey all, Misty here!

Finally broke my block and I am writing again. Hoping to have my re-do of part three done in the next few weeks.

Stay tuned!

Enjoyed the story line. Disappointed it isn't finished.

Feel like the author is trying to add too many things into the story. The incest was not needed, the sister should have been there only for absolute support. The sexual tension with Dee was not needed. Also Tina should have left both Julie and Lisa after the hrt incident. Maybe get with Ash. Honestly if this story continues I would like to see Lisa punished and Julie heart broken. (Side note, having big breasts is not indicative of being more "womanly"). This story had so much potential. I hope if the author decides to continue it gets better. But right now it has just left a bad taste in my mouth after reading the last couple chapters.

This series started out great. But the author tried to add a lot of unnecessary things. The incest was not needed, the sister should have just been the strong support that Tina needed. The sexual tension with Dee was not needed. Trans people go through a lot as it is without everyone trying to manipulate them. And honestly the hrt without telling Tina was too much. Lisa should be punished for it. And Julie should be heart broken after Tina leaves her (which she should). I would love to see Ash stepping up. And Tina playing a mentor role for the girl she meet at Iowa. I would have loved to see Tina be more assertive (something like women studies series; girl empowerment). This story had so much potential. The last couple chapters left a bad taste in my mouth. I hope the author gets to complete it though.

It is ridiculous the number of incomplete stories on this site. This story started out well, then eventually added some unnecessary elements, but was still a fun read. Now it’s been years and no follow up or completion. Sad and irritating.

Great story sadly never finished

He needs to be locked up in the funny farm for a good long time to get his head on steraight. Riducluous.

Noobdude i doubt you still listen to the insensitive idiotic useless assholes that spend time criticizing when they have no ideas or creativity of their own. I wish they would just read something else or go to another site. I wish you’d finish the story. I read it because I want to know what Tina will do, what Ash will discover, how Chris will help his sister. I worry that Tina is wrong about Lisa and Julie but if that is the direction then that is the direction. I know it’s been six years. Come back and finish. If I can send a direction message I will, first time for me.

All you end-of-the-series folks, I've submitted my rewrite of the next bit of part three. I majorly expanded the week after Vegas, where Chris/Tina is working on the GTO, to include a new scene with Julie, a more developed and personal day with Lisa, a higher amount of drama with Tiffany, and wrote a different ending for Lisa and Tina's date.

I know it isn't part 8, but I hope you won't be disappointed with some new content.

I have just read this series for the second time, that's how much I love it! I do hope that there will be more parts added in the future! There is so much going on and I am sure others are also anxious to see where it leads...

Too many inconsistencies. Chris either loves his wife or he doesn't. If he's fine with getting some on the side with Lisa, then he has to be ok with her getting hers. And accept that his marriage is over.

Let's not even get into both women (a.k.a. cunts) making decisions that affect Chris's future without talking to him first.

Why is Chris so concerned about being feminized? His balls have been gone since the start of the story.

Then there's the constant lies and deceit amongst the group.

Maybe there is potential here for a good story, but this has too many contradictions to qualify.

Lisa is a great example of what domination isn’t. She just abusive, plain and simple.

The HRT is the final drop, that level of non-consent should never be rewarded.