All Comments on 'A Carnal Family Vacation'

The story suffers from the bad choice of words, being something that likely can't happen. Like "gushed to" can't happen but a better choice would have been "rushed to" presents an image of reality.

I'm not sure i get the story at all. Just didn't do it for me dawg.

Very disappointed ... I wanted to jerk off with some male-male parental incest. I'll just browse for such cock tormenting stimulus and whack off my throbbing, bulging hard cock to a thunderous, volcanic eruption of man juice!

Go back to the drawing board and start from scratch . The present story just does not cut it.