All Comments on 'A Carnal Family Vacation'

Go back to the drawing board and start from scratch . The present story just does not cut it.

Very disappointed ... I wanted to jerk off with some male-male parental incest. I'll just browse for such cock tormenting stimulus and whack off my throbbing, bulging hard cock to a thunderous, volcanic eruption of man juice!

I'm not sure i get the story at all. Just didn't do it for me dawg.

The story suffers from the bad choice of words, being something that likely can't happen. Like "gushed to" can't happen but a better choice would have been "rushed to" presents an image of reality.