All Comments on 'A Formerly Shy Person Ch. 02'

you stir the imagination quite nicely.

you do need proof read more though.

waist is not spelled waste in this context.

waste is a name for trash.

More NaykedAnonymous goodness! This is at least as good as the first instalment and I particularly like how things are progressing in increments. I really hope there's going to be more.

This is a great story! I love it! I rarely comment, but dang! This is a hot story! I am looking forward to seeing more of your work.

I loved your story. I believe it was well written and I hope there will be more of this story soon.

RecHiker