All Comments on 'A Formerly Shy Person Ch. 02'

I loved your story. I believe it was well written and I hope there will be more of this story soon.

RecHiker

This is a great story! I love it! I rarely comment, but dang! This is a hot story! I am looking forward to seeing more of your work.

More NaykedAnonymous goodness! This is at least as good as the first instalment and I particularly like how things are progressing in increments. I really hope there's going to be more.

you stir the imagination quite nicely.

you do need proof read more though.

waist is not spelled waste in this context.

waste is a name for trash.