All Comments on 'A More Tricked Treat'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
OOOPS!

It would seem I made a mistake as I read these stories out of order. I read " A Treat Turns Tricks " first. But I must say I've enjoyed both. I just wish there were more of them!

MadelaineMadelainealmost 14 years ago

Loving your work! Your prose is a pleasure to read, funny too. I am off to read more of what you have written :-)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Very well titled...

Again, well told and written. Geneva was well and truly penetrated, it brings the concept of being fucked to an entirely new level. <U>I'm not accusing you of anything!</U> That said, I have read several hard and soft backed SF novels that incorporated aspects of your story. One that comes to mind features a humanoid race with males sporting two prehensile penises. They could copulate with humans and of course they did - consensually. You can guess how that went.

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<I>-- srgeek --</I>

TE999TE999over 15 years ago
Helluva way...

to get tenure. Brings a whole new dimension to 'joining the faculty'. Good luck in the contest.

Selena_KittSelena_Kittover 15 years ago
Love the twists...

Always love the twists your stories take! Good luck in the contest!

jomarjomarover 15 years ago
Ha!

A light little romp with a fun twist. I enjoyed the names you chose and laughed with you when you wrote 'succulent little dumpling' and 'bountiful thighs.' Nicely done, VM.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Another fine story

Hm, I like the way your mind works. Great story.

TricialenTricialenover 15 years ago
Truly Evil!

So very evil VM! Poor Geneva, she is so caught in Teddy's wicked web of tentacles. Will her husband snap out of his sensual haze in time to save them both or is it all up to Ginny? You have a very vivid imagination and aren't we lucky that you share it with us?

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