All Comments on 'A Night on the Patio'

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yuiyuialmost 20 years ago
Very well written!

Believable characters and believable character interaction. Will definitely read more. Well done!

Yui ^_^

spyro1123spyro1123almost 20 years ago
very nice

this was a great short story, i would have liked to have read a little more about what she was feeling during the sex...but otherwise masterfull

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