All Comments on 'A Night on the Patio'

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spyro1123spyro1123almost 20 years ago
very nice

this was a great short story, i would have liked to have read a little more about what she was feeling during the sex...but otherwise masterfull

yuiyuialmost 20 years ago
Very well written!

Believable characters and believable character interaction. Will definitely read more. Well done!

Yui ^_^

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