All Comments on 'A Party Pete Won't Ever Forget'

Very erotic!

Looks like you cut it of too early.

The story was too short, not enough teasing and details. Explain in a bit more descriptive way so that visualization isn't difficult

Too little background. Then you fell off a cliff with the ending. There simply wasn't enough of this sad little story to make it clever or entertaining.

Who is Jim???(last paragraph on page 1)

Damn you hate pete. Gave him a small dick and a complete humiliation weekend stacy is pitying him and dont even finish the story to at least have a somewhat happy ending. Had potential but sorry gave you a pity 3 star like pete got a pity fuck. Rewrite or finish the story.

Poor Pete, as mentioned a nerdy virgin and you gave him a small dick, I'm sorry but that's just fucked up and really ruined it.

Please write a second chapter for this story!