by storytyme
Poor Pete, as mentioned a nerdy virgin and you gave him a small dick, I'm sorry but that's just fucked up and really ruined it.
Damn you hate pete. Gave him a small dick and a complete humiliation weekend stacy is pitying him and dont even finish the story to at least have a somewhat happy ending. Had potential but sorry gave you a pity 3 star like pete got a pity fuck. Rewrite or finish the story.
Too little background. Then you fell off a cliff with the ending. There simply wasn't enough of this sad little story to make it clever or entertaining.
The story was too short, not enough teasing and details. Explain in a bit more descriptive way so that visualization isn't difficult