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Click hereI got a text on a quiet afternoon while I was in the office. It was from Sarah. Odd, I thought because she was just downstairs cleaning stalls. I opened it. "Check the video," it said.
I put the composite monitoring screen on. Most of the stalls were empty as the horses were turned out in their paddocks. Sarah was in "Madison's corner" in Caesar's old stall. My heart quickened as I switched to that camera feed. Her smoldering dark eyes stared seductively at the camera lens as she did a slow strip tease, then proceeded to masturbate on a blanket. She leaned her head against the wall and closed her eyes, a mix of concentration and ecstasy on her face. Just as she came, she opened her eyes and stared back into the camera, inviting me to cum with her. I did.
Good pace, the relationship develops slowly, but satisfactorily, and you have several interesting secondary characters - especially Charlene.
The end was too fast. There is no mention of Sarah getting paid by Madison's father for her pain and suffering. Madison is not punished for attempted murder. The cheating wife's lover was not punished. Too many unfinished aspects in this story.
I liked the story, and I wish there were a bit more. I hope you keep writing and posting!
Yoshi