All Comments on 'A Stranger in the Supermarket'

Now this is what I call top quality literature. Not only a very horny story but written down with excellent writing skills. Good to know there's someone out there who doesn't rape the language, as so many authors do. Thanks a lot, and I hope there's more to read.

Cliffa

Great first story. I'll look for more from you.

You must have some previous experience.

This is an excellent auspicious start.

You tell the tales that I want to read. Keep it up.

brilliantly written, could almost feel myself there, and i wish i was.. keep it up!! Fantastic!!

Thank You.

Great start to writing, and love the possibility of public exposure! Keep up the good work.

The language seemed poetic and unclear, so it was my imagination along with the text that brought me to enjoy this little adventure. I am used to the action being detailed a bit more, so I wasn't sure if what I thought was going on was what was intended.