by RelBachman
The language seemed poetic and unclear, so it was my imagination along with the text that brought me to enjoy this little adventure. I am used to the action being detailed a bit more, so I wasn't sure if what I thought was going on was what was intended.
Great start to writing, and love the possibility of public exposure! Keep up the good work.
brilliantly written, could almost feel myself there, and i wish i was.. keep it up!! Fantastic!!
This is an excellent auspicious start.
You tell the tales that I want to read. Keep it up.
Now this is what I call top quality literature. Not only a very horny story but written down with excellent writing skills. Good to know there's someone out there who doesn't rape the language, as so many authors do. Thanks a lot, and I hope there's more to read.
Cliffa