by Tatonka
Thank for your comment, I hope when you finished reading the story and finished jacking off you took out your gun and shot yourself you goody two shoes freak. Why do you read stories that upset you so badly. Is your wife out fucking your brother while you sit at home and read stories from literotica. Fag!
Not sure why some people complain, its clear the type of story it is, IF YOU DON'T LIKE IT DON'T READ IT, leave it for those who do like it to enjoy it.
I wouldn't mind if this one had 20 chapters or more--the possibility is there. Fine story line.
I Would LOVE it if Allen were to find out how slutty of a mom he has and what he would do about it.
are you sure you wrote the first couple chapters too or did you never read them ? who is fucking and flirting around here, the husband or the 2 tarts ? who give a shit eventhough they have not even grown up kids.
I hope TIm is getting it elsewhere. Their partnership is over. They now have to write a new marriage contract. one where they both get to have sex with anyone and everyone they want to but only on an equal basis, if Tami has sex with 20 men then Tim gets to have sex with 20 women. That is only fair.
Needs to buy a big gun and shoot some people, starting with whoever wrote this trash.