All Comments on 'Alpha Wolf’s Demise'

but your english sucks.

you have potentially good ideas but you are unreadable at this time.

and as a side issue... too much detail about weapons detracts from a story.

Your English is good mate! Keep up the good work!

...sucks ulcerated haemorrhoids.

Your writing is pathetic.

Your spelling atrocious.

And nothing is original.

It’s a pity you don’t get the financial rewards you deserve - you’d starve to death and stop subjecting an unsuspecting public to this puerile drivel.