All Comments on 'Alpha Wolf’s Demise'

...sucks ulcerated haemorrhoids.

Your writing is pathetic.

Your spelling atrocious.

And nothing is original.

It’s a pity you don’t get the financial rewards you deserve - you’d starve to death and stop subjecting an unsuspecting public to this puerile drivel.

Your English is good mate! Keep up the good work!

but your english sucks.

you have potentially good ideas but you are unreadable at this time.

and as a side issue... too much detail about weapons detracts from a story.