All Comments on 'Angry Mom'

Please don’t write another story

LMBO.

At least he tried. The basis of his story was good.

If you can do better then step up.

Not a terrible premise for an erotic story, just executed really, really, horribly badly. At least you've got a fairly unique name. That'll make it easier to remember to NOT read anything else you post.

Ah screw all those asshats. You keep writing,. Your story is kinda short, sure, but promising.

Look forward to your next story.

Everyone starts someplace, I liked it... keep going.

waste of time and space and yes I can do better and do.

It's not erotic

Based on what we've seen so far, I have no interest in seeing what mom will do next.

The image of her drunk, sitting on the sofa, smoking, with her finger stuffed up her pink asshole, would inspire me to request early entry into the Army.

Two totally unlikable characters, mother and son

Two smart characters, dad and Amanda

Good advice - if someone has other opinions, fuck 'em.

idiots.

I️ liked it

WIMP stories 1 star